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The special blue thing

April 19, 2011

Amulet

The swan was thrashing about at the edge of the water, it’s huge wings beating the gravel and scattering all the other birds.  Isabell watched in horror as the swan twisted and turned, making loud, Ominous hissing noises.  ”I couldn’t stand this,” I shouted over the din, “I have to see if I can help it. Can you call someone – the police the vet or whoever? I’m sure he’s injured.” I moved towards the swan cautiously. “Isabell, don’t be daft,” I Cried. “It’ll brake your arm.”                                ”I have to try,” I muttered to myself as I edged down the little beach towards the swan. The swan was frantic now, and as I got closer I could see why.The bracelet on it’s leg had got caught on a piece of curved wire which was sticking up out of the compacted sand and gravel.I stopped and dropped to a crouch, and tried to appear less threatening. I wasn’t sure how to make soothing noises to distressed swan, but no one hear me so I had to go. “There, there,” I cooed, “nice swan. I’m not going to hurt you even more.” It fixed me with a baleful eye, but slowed down a little. I edged closer. Keeping a wary eye on the vicious beak and those powerful wings. It suddenly stopped hissing and in the unexpected silence all I could hear was the strange sound of the huge webbed feet scuffing the beach. It held it’s wings out wide,looking as threatening as possible. It was doing a fantastic job. At least it broke my arm now, I reasoned, the exams were all over. We had finished the last one in the morning and our afternoon was supposed to be spent partying. At this point though, only Isabell and I were left, the others having long since gone home to get ready for tonight.  I got to within  a few feet of the swan when it suddenly decided that I was close enough.. With a huge cry it strained up, flapping its wings wide.

By Natalie Tam Y4

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8 Comments leave one →
  1. Bella permalink
    January 24, 2012 6:34 pm

    Hi i’m Bella i’m from Burnley Primary School the Deans primary school looks great. Whoever wrote this story is awesome!!! They could be an author!!! I might come to that school. I’m in Y5 right now.

    From Bella
    Burnley Primary School, Y5

    • Natalie T Y5 permalink
      January 24, 2012 6:39 pm

      Hello Bella are you the Bella that goes cheerleading? Thankyou for liking and reading my story.

  2. louis y4 permalink
    July 23, 2011 4:20 pm

    Well done Natalie I really like your story. PLEAS TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!
    *_*

    • Natalie Tam Y5 permalink
      November 10, 2011 6:29 pm

      hi louis thanks for reading but i am still trying to think whats gonna happen next. Thanxs anyway

  3. bethanyy4 permalink
    July 9, 2011 10:15 am

    hey natalie i sometimes read that book when you lend it to me :)

  4. bethany y4 permalink
    May 27, 2011 5:51 pm

    wow cool natalie i want to see the next part

  5. Mrs Watling permalink
    April 20, 2011 8:46 pm

    Did you write this Natalie? It’s very good, I would like to know what happens after the swan strained up and flapped his wings wide.

    • Natalie Tam Y5 permalink
      November 10, 2011 6:27 pm

      hello mrs watling i love y5 and sorry i didnt answer you. Some of it i got from the book but most of it i wrote. Thankyou for reading it and thanks for saying you like it. Bye.

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