Making a new best friend .
March 11, 2011
Chapter one
A long time ago there lived a young girl called Lucy. Everyday Lucy went to a street dance class. She loved going there because she arrived in Scotland when she was only five and by going to street dance she met lots of friends. Everybody liked her because she was very enthusiastic and was very friendly. She lived in a small cottage at the end of a dust trail that leads through a deep wood. Most of Lucys life she lived with her father. Umforchuantly, her father had to travel all around the world for his job. After a while he founed his final destanation Scotland. Lucy didnt like scotland at first but eventually setled in when she found her first friend at street dance. By Ellie. Chapter 2 will be started on Monday.
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This was very good but you spelt a few words incorrectly other than that it was FABULOUS. ELLIE FORAN you could be an author!!!!
wow ellie i love that i cant wait till chapter 1 starts because it will be amazing!!
that last comment was by hannah c i for got to put c on
sorry
Why can’t chapter 2 start now?
I loved that
A good introduction to your story Ellie. I wonder what will happen next? Will her friend turn our to be not a good friend after all? Will her Dad have to leave her in Scotland for a while because of his job?? So many questions!
wow Ellie that writing is great i can’t wait to see chapter two of you story
Ellie well done i love your story. who are lucy’s friends Ellie?
This is a great opening to a story Ellie, I look forward to reading Chapter 2.
Wow well done Ellie youve put alot of work into that story.
Ellie i love your story but who are her friends? Anyway you could be a author. I LOVE YOUR STORY!